This is my vimeo it is when we stall all our video's. My persuasive writing is about having a science lab. I want a science because it would be really FUN!!!
Great to see you managed to locate your imovie you created on the iPad Riley and share it on your blog. What great ICT skills you are developing.
I really enjoyed listing and watching you deliver your written argument. You had some great ideas about having a science lab at school - makes sense, and you have definitely convinced me. Its a great idea. I enjoy science too and think we could explore and investigate so much more if we had all the equipment set out in our very our laboratory.
Great to see you managed to locate your imovie you created on the iPad Riley and share it on your blog. What great ICT skills you are developing.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed listing and watching you deliver your written argument. You had some great ideas about having a science lab at school - makes sense, and you have definitely convinced me. Its a great idea. I enjoy science too and think we could explore and investigate so much more if we had all the equipment set out in our very our laboratory.
Whoops! I think Ms Mynes had better remember to proof read, especially the first sentence in the 2nd paragraph.
DeleteDo you agree that it should say 'listening' and not 'listing'? Would that make more sense.
Very Persuasive!!!!!
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